Success criteria for camp writting

Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader) use a range of verbs use a variety of adverbs Language features (phrases that help paint a picture) select 2 - 3 similes select 2 - 3 metaphors or personification choose onomatopoeia to show sounds (crash!) select words that start with the same sound (alliteration) Sentences use short sentences to create suspense Structure use 3 - 5 paragraphs.

I think I need a heap more practice with language features all of them aspecialy personification .i did really well at using expression

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