Mcaw beats

Description:this term for writing we have been working on persuasive writing on head headphones here is my writing 👇

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Risks

Description: today we did a risk taking sheet it's when a kid teacher comes and tells you what to do and they help I got Tom he was a pretty good teacher he helped me but maybe next time he could speak up

Kapa haka portfolio sample

Description: This term in Kapa haka we created new lyrics on a song(hall of fame) Which was really fun for the band and Kapa haka well I really enjoyed it we also performed at the regent it was cool set up And we all did really well.

Live performance
 What are you most proud of and why? Becoming leader and playing for the band because it's a cool leader ship response ability.

What challenged you the most and why? Playing base and doing the actions
 What do you need to work on next time and why?Helping people and being a little more louder

Feedback feedfoward:nice work and keep up the nice leading but you could of helped others a bit more Tom H

Thanks Tom will work on that.

Evaluation: I think his term we all did really well in Kapa haka and we're all confident on stage asspecially.

Art portfolio sample

Description: this term we decided to self portraits and here is the slide of how we completed the self portraits. First we went through doing a draft then we do the actual thing and then we did a picture of me and I decided to just do pastel for my colouring in.

Evaluation:I think my self portrait background is good but next maybe take my time on me(the person)

Feedback/feedfoward I think you did well because I like your picture. Next time you could take away the targets.

Sebastian 

Writing portfolio sample

Description: this Term I was in Troy's writing group. Troy showed us a video about how the make tennis balls as the video was playing we had to write down thing that they reminded us of. But instead of just using those and writing a story it couldn't relate to tennis so my ideas were serena William pies because the material looked like pastry so pies and my last idea was perfect cause the chucked away the tennis balls that weren't good away. 

Here is the video of what we watched.

http://thekidshouldseethis.com/post/how-to-make-a-tennis-ball

here is my writing 

evaluation: I think I did well at my description because it was very descriptive and very happy with my writing.

feedbackfeedfoward: I think you did a good ob on adding detail and making it interesting to read. Next time you could make it longer and more funny! -Zara

book buddy portfolio sample

Description: this term we had book buddies so we read and do reading cards together me and William (buddy) kinda make it a competition so who ever reads the most wins or finishes the book first





Feedback/feedfoward: I think you had William must have a really good time but next time make more sense cause I don't really get it#jacobw

Evaluation:I think since me and William have been buddy's I had loved reading slot more ! But next time I need to do the cards more.

Measurement portfolio sample

Description: this term we have been learning mesurment it's been really tuff to solve we go to workshops that we thought we mainly needed to work on and got lots of knowledge on measurement now.