Whakapapa

Description: a Whakapapa is when you make a poster about your family it tells you everything if your grand parents are still alive or not. 

Feedforward: maybe next time write it in pencil first then write it pen or vivid. Sam 

Ok Sam I'll work on it 

Evaluation:I think I did my best at remembering who were in my family and telling you guys what (d) stands for and ? and x.

What goes on behind the gates of El Rancho

Description:the reason why I choose this peice of writing to do was because I like to entertain people and if you want to find out who the mystery farter is read the rest of my story. And find out what goes on behind the gates of camp El Rancho.

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My story

CAMP! Ok so hi my name is Eli. It's 12:00 on the dot and I swear a rifle just got shot through our window!! Ok it wasn't a rifle, it was not me I swear!! Who let one rip? Was it you Cohen (tear gas)? Was it you max (machine gun?Logan (killer) was it you? “No” he is the only one awake. It's a mystery! Who was it? It's silent then brrrrrr! wow they are slow but loud and proud, it was not anyone below me. It must be max, or hunter it was not me! So who was it? Max or hunter? Max is the machine gun, hunter is the grenade. Who is the worst cause they stink geez! Well machine guns keep shooting for a while so max may be the one…

So in morning I tell max and hunter what happened but before I can say “ max” brrrrrr!! Hunter let one rip! It was absolutely disgusting! “At least hunter admits” that one was me but last nigh “brrrrrrrr” Max's pops one out before hunter can finish! 

Night says hunter then  “brrrrrrrr” there goes hunter again I say. It Carries on and on and on and on until it finally stopped! Then I decided to do some investigating/science. Then I realised, fart smell rises to the ceiling so …

Later that night I remembered Jack was in our cabin! He must be the mystery farter! 

The next morning I hit Jack up asking questions the he finally admits it! Yay we found the mystery farter! Punishment time! Do you have any suggestions “I ask him”? No he says,how about we chuck you in that poo. I say while pointing at a whole pile of poo!! “No he says no no no” oh what then I ask before I can give me an idea. I got one!!!! Instead of smelly your own gas you clean the toilets and smell other people's gas!!! Hehehehehe 

Feedback-feedfoward: I liked your story its really funny but the ending is werid. Tom

Evaluation: I liked how I entertained very well and made it funny but it got a bit boring after a while.

2016 camp portfolio sample

Description: El rancho is in Waikanae we arrived on Tuesday we did 10 activities.And had lots of fun we had seven in our cabin and in the morning we had breakfast. Then a couple activities then morning tea then a couple more activities then afternoon tea. Then we do the same things but we had skit practise every night and dinner and camp dairies.

Feedback/feedfoward:I like how you drew the picture and you wrote neat and tidy. No feed forward it is perfect.alex 

Thank you Alex.

One word portfolio sample

Description: This year we decided to make one word it is a word that is a goal that you have to try and achieve. Like my one word is perfection I want to get everything as close as I can to perfect. We decided to make an art work with our one word here is mine. I descied to make the bricks and the rainbow thing for the looks.

 Feedback/feedfoward: I think you did good at adding colour and making it creative and bold so that it stands out on the wall.  (Nothing needs improvement) 

Evaluation: I think that for next I need to make the bricks same night width and length but I like the bricks when the are even. 

Treaty of Waitangi

W.A.L.A: the treaty of Waitangi.

Description: For the last week we have been working towards making a Waitangi Day video / poster treaty / myn is the treaty everyone worked hard to make their. 

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Big idea: for my activity I made a treaty with Hunter we decided to make a vote for the top five questions out of seven. And the questions on the poster are the top five.

Feedback: I think you did really good getting it organised for everyone to sign.

Feed-ford: for next time make it a bit more clear/ Jonty 

Evaluation:I think I did well on getting it printed and the vote, but need to work on it closer to perfection. I showed MĀTAU by getting everyone in poutama to sign it.