Sunday, 13 April 2014

Success criteria for camp writting

Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)

  • use a range of verbs

  • use a variety of adverbs

Language features (phrases that help paint a picture)

  • select 2 - 3 similes

  • select 2 - 3 metaphors or personification

  • choose onomatopoeia to show sounds (crash!)

  • select words that start with the same sound (alliteration)


  • use short sentences to create suspense


  • use 3 - 5 paragraphs.

I think I need a heap more practice with language features all of them aspecialy personification .i did really well at using expression


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