Tuesday 2 December 2014

Maths experiment/ capicity


Since it took 1 minute and 3 seconds to got out it means it is a big jar.

Tuesday 25 November 2014

Wednesday 19 November 2014

Bubble gum brocili

Bubble gum brocili



Who's idea was it ? McDonald's



Why was the experiment a failure? Because i didn't taste rite

Thursday 13 November 2014

My homework

MY HOME WORK

Walt:use complex sentence


YAY School time VRVRVR Here you go ,said mum have a good day . OH NO MY HOME WORK ,Eli said. Finally the bell Rung WHERE THE HECK IS YOUR HOME WORK ,said mrs ugly  Well that's what I call her ! Ahh my Homework I was Doing it when an eagle,s Claws Grabbed it I Sore it's evil eyes poke out the side  as IT SLOWLY drops my homework into the pond And the eels toke it to FIJI .i went to Fiji and I went on the jet ski with this random AND HE SAID  i don't think there any eels around here so I went home riding my eagle Ya no the one that stole my BLIMIN HOME WORK GEUZZ and then I said just drop me here so he dropped me at school . We'll i should belive that after a great Poem "said mrs ugly POEM THATS NOT A POEM THATS TRUE "said eli FINE FINE I BELIVE YOU.

The 

Monday 10 November 2014

Best soccer game ever



BEST SOCCER GAME EVER


WALT:complex sentence                          

The hooter goes, it's sounds like a high pitch scream! As a ball is coming straight to my feet I Run to the ball and randomly kick it as hard as I  can, and its heading straight to the corner of the Goal SWISH I hear Net. what a goal scored,  by Eli said the commentator, over the speaker ! 


I start in the middle of the pitch with jack I pass to jack, he steps his defender than the next Then  the goalie  runs up to jack he juggles over his head and shoots its heading for the post so i squint then sprint my heart out and my head hits the ball and it heading write for the left hand corner WOW what a goal by Eli'said the commentator what a game !the all whites, are a head with with lead, 2 nil !welcome back its now half time so that's get started !Chelseas ball number 4 steps jack but not me BAMM right on target I pass to jack he runs To the side line it looks like he is going to the corner ,he is Ponting at me go side go back go forward, its coming straight to my feet, but I'm no sure what to do, my heart is pounding AHH POOF the goalie missed !!WHAT ANOTHER GREAT GOAL BY ELi 'said the commentator!! Chelsea's ball, he passes back THEN STRAIGHT UP  field even though I'm stricker i RACE down the FIELD LIKE A ROCKET GOING UP, BUT I'm going SIDE WAY IM NEARLY THERE JUST WHEN HE IS ABOUT SHOOT I SLIDE THE BALL OUT OF HIS FEET SNAP HE MISSED THE BALL THE GOALIE PICKS it up!!! Our goalie SMASHED the ball down field right to my feet i randomly juggle,to my friend jack then he SHOOTS What a goal! Wait they said it is a fowl to us we play advantage so we take the goal!THE ALL WHITES HAVE WON THE FINAL!!!!   Where in the lockers And   all I here is clapping VERY LOUD !! Thousands of people come round the corner the all have vivids And all I here is sign here sign their,I'm out of here VRVRVRVRV in My Lamborghini  

Thursday 30 October 2014

My goals for athletics



GOAL 1-hit the board with speed on long jump


GOAL 2-pump my arms on sprints!


GOAL 3- jump more then 98cm in high jump

Thursday 23 October 2014

Thursday 18 September 2014

Drama with nic


WALT Develop ideas, skills and concepts in drama 



Evaluation:I think I did good with poster but I could make it lease blurry next time !




Buddyfeed:you do good in the freeze frames because you have facial expressions 


backfeedford :next time you could have more spontaneoity.   By  ZAC M









Thursday 11 September 2014

Reading sample

WALT:fluency use exspesion and read like you talk 

Description:make video with you doing what goal is in reading





Task: ebony made  us make a video about us reading what our goal is so it's fluency 

Make sure you don't read like a robot !!!!!!

Feedback feedford : I think your reading is getting much more fluent. I think you could work on making the video louder and more interactive.
-Anna
THANK you for feed back anna :)

PROVE IT

Wednesday 20 August 2014

The learning pit

WALA: The Learning Pit







http://tinyurl.com/lvp62mv

Description: We have been learning about when good learning happens.

Task: Share what you know about the learning pit.

Criteria:
Draw the Learning Pit.
List at least 3 feelings that you might have when you are in the pit.
List at least 3 strategies that you could use to get out of the pit.
Label where good learning happens.
List 3 things you could say to yourself when you are in the pit.

Evaluation:I think the poster was good but I could work on being neater

Reflect on a time when you have been in the pit.
How did you feel when you were in the pit?
What did you do to work out of the pit?

Feedback/Feedforward:

Writting


WALT:  Entertain

Description: We read the poem “My Remarkable Journey” which inspired us to write our own remarkable journeys about why our homework wasn’t at school today.

YAY School time VRVRVR Here you go ,said mum have a good day . OH NO MY HOME WORK ,Eli said. Finally the bell Rung WHERE THE HECK IS YOUR HOME WORK ,said mrs ugly  Well that's what I call her ! Ahh my Homework I was Doing it when an eagle,s Claws Grabbed it I Sore it's evil eyes poke out the side  as IT SLOWLY drops my homework into the pond And the eels toke it to FIJI .i went to Fiji and I went on the jet ski with this random AND HE SAID  i don't think there any eels around here so I went home riding my eagle Ya no the one that stole my BLIMIN HOME WORK GEUZZ and then I said just drop me here so he dropped me at school . We'll i should belive that after a great Poem "said mrs ugly POEM THATS NOT A POEM THATS TRUE "said eli FINE FINE I BELIVE YOU.

THE END
 


Criteria:
We decided that a quality piece of writing has the following things. Reflect on whether these things are in your story:
Introduction: It hooks the reader in the first few lines making them want to read more
Punctuation: Is your writing ready for a reader? Does your punctuation make it easy for them to read?
Short sentences: Do you create suspense by using these in your writing?
Onomatopoeia: Are these in your writing to create impact?
Alliteration: Are these in your writing to create impact?
Similes/Metaphors: Are these in your writing to create impact?

Evaluation:I think I could work on making it a bit funner
1. What do you think is the best part of your story?The poem when the eel part happens .

2. What was the hardest part about completing this portfolio sample?Making up the poem

3.  Next time, what is a goal you can work towards?Make it a bit bigger because I think it kinda ended .

Feedback/feedford:very good but You can work on more describing.#Houston

Sunday 10 August 2014

Tē rēo Maori week

WALT: communicate a message.


Description: We have been participating in 3 different workshops around colour, compositions and fonts.  We put these skills to use in a poster sharing our knowledge about Te Reo Maori.



Evaluation:I think our poster is GOOD but could be better A lot better but our pictures are good butter TV is spelt rong :( but from that I think its good

Buddyfeedbackfeedford:you have a great poster but you could not have Moari languge so big you can't see the ruler word


Composition:I think our poster is pretty balanced But I could be better.  



Font:I think a fonts really stand out i think we did really good.


Colour:I think we have done pretty well with the coulors but we could have a bit less coulor full and more Moari coulors




Accuracy:I think mostly every thing is spelt right but the TV in Moari !




What are you most proud of and why? I'm proud of our fonts ,they are really good.
   
What challenged you the most and why? When we were running out of time!

Next time, what is a goal you can work towards?Stay on task a little nit better



Wednesday 30 July 2014

Prove it/Maths !!!!


Me and Sam J made this so we could move up on our basket hoop it's like we all did a test and like we put the level on our basket ball  Up.

Wednesday 2 July 2014

Smart goals term 3

My writing goal is to...my writting goal is to use a variety of sentence starters 
The reason I have decided to focus on this goal is because...by editing my work and using a variety of sentence starers 

I will accomplish my goal by...using a variety of sentence starters. You will see this in my writing all of next term.

My reading goal is to...my goal is to draw conclusions  from the information I gather as I read 
The reason I have decided to focus on this goal is so I know the main part of the story

will accomplish my goal by...practicing sumariseing every time I read something .

My maths goal is to...confidently using my 2,5 and 10 multiplication and division facts to solve problems is my next focus 

The reason I have decided to focus on this goal is because...because my 5 2 10 are the easiest for me start from.

I will accomplish my goal by...mum has signed me up for some maths help after school and practising my times tables for five mins every day.



Wednesday 25 June 2014

Grass hopper tennis

WALT: improve our small ball skills like catching, throwing, and hitting.

Description: We have been participating in a tennis programme with Big John (John Salisbury) from Tennis Manawatu. He has taught us some tennis skills that help with controlling and hitting the ball 






Eveluation: I think next time slow down on the race tracks cause it kept falling off


Buddy comment : I think you have done good with your description . From zac N



What challenged you the most and Why?race tracks because It was going to fast .



Next time, what is a goal you can work towards?to cut the cheese not my finger!


What are you most proud of and why? I'm  proud of my self becasue I won a game.






Wednesday 18 June 2014

Integrity sample


WALT: communicate a message with others.
WALT: show integrity.

DESCRIPTION: We have been learning about integrity.  We want to share our understanding with others.

What? Make a Puppet Pal to show our understanding of integrity.
Why? To show what we know about integrity, to share during our Student Led Conference.
When? Term 2, Week 1 - 7
Who? The World




EVALUATION: I think we could next time make it a bit more funner because it got a bit board ! 

Buddy feed back:i think that you did a great job but what is the stuff in the background?(jeffery) they are jet planes just too make it a bit more interesting (.Eli ) 

Monday 16 June 2014

writing sample


WALT: inform

DESCRIPTION: Write an explanation about something you have learned about energy.


 
This is my first draft 

This is my second draft

Everything in the world is made out of atoms. What does the three states of matter mean? Ice is a solid and when you hold it it turns into a liquid because the energy flows inside and atoms separate. Liquids are oil and water and stuff like that. Gas is like steam air/atoms. Gas is basically air because you can't see it and you breath it.






Evaluation next time I'm going to listen to Cam'Ryn


Buddy feedback: you need to put the WALT at the top and the discription is too short. You need to make it longer Cam'Ryn

Ebony's feedback: I think you did a good job explaining the difference between all the states of matter. I like how you ask questions in your writing. It helps he reader to connect with what you are telling them.

Next time you could aim to add more detail to your writing. You might do this with complex sentences. Also I think you could work on a detailed diagram. This one seams a bit basic and I think you could do better.







Wednesday 11 June 2014

Science sample

http://tinyurl.com/            http://www.youtube.com/embed/me-Kc38shEA
WALT: show our understanding of how energy works.

DESCRIPTION: We have been learning about energy. To share our learning, we have made a video to explain how energy works.

Buddy feed back : next time try to make it a bit more intreasting (Anna)

Evaluation :I think I should make it more intreasting . (ELI) 

Monday 9 June 2014

Mnemoincs


Feedback: I think you have done a great job at following the guidelines for this post. You image is really eye catching.

Now you have a good trick to help you learn your spelling words. 

Tuesday 3 June 2014

Literacy sample

http://www.showme.com/sh/?h=KRpdvV2

 We are learning to find other ways to solve problems like 5+5+5+5

Walt : try to teach people how to solve times tables easier

Description :how to solve 5 time tables like skip count five times 2 so double 5 is ten thats the
Awnser    

Reflection: I think could be more descriptive like in the video i didn't tell much stuff


buddy reflection eli you did really well at your timetable i thick that you did a awesome job and eli good job i like it.

Tuesday 13 May 2014

Spelling test 2014 term two

Reflection

I got 57 rong out of 300
Last week we did a spelling test
The ones we got rong we rite them on a peace of paper and take them home so somone calls them out and we rite and they correct them on the peace of paper that we rite them on 

Monday 12 May 2014

Tables challenge

I need to practice on my math a lot  more a specialy sheet B !!

Wednesday 7 May 2014

Spelling test

Spelling test 2014



 

:reflectchion  
I'm proud of myself because I got like a quarter rong but I reckon I should work on them heaps more !!

Sunday 13 April 2014

Success criteria for camp writting

Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)

  • use a range of verbs

  • use a variety of adverbs

Language features (phrases that help paint a picture)

  • select 2 - 3 similes

  • select 2 - 3 metaphors or personification

  • choose onomatopoeia to show sounds (crash!)

  • select words that start with the same sound (alliteration)

Sentences

  • use short sentences to create suspense

Structure

  • use 3 - 5 paragraphs.

I think I need a heap more practice with language features all of them aspecialy personification .i did really well at using expression



Walt:entertain 

Thursday 10 April 2014

Tuesday 8 April 2014

Abseling

Time has come. As I climb up the ladders I'm saying to my self  how dose she do this for a job climbing up the ladders all day.                                                                                                                                                                                                                     
 As I got to the top ants said have a seat. as she lets someone climb down and then sore a hand poke up from the side wait there.    she said as she hive fives a hand. and she asked me what rope I want to you,s  I said hmmm she pushed me to do the black rope it was the best

day 2 of writting 






It was the best because you 
 can  control your speed. she said  just stand on the other side of the bar i said  now.  she said yes okay she said  I'll clip you. on click now she said remember this holds an elephant. she told me don't bounce on the rubber ok. I started walking down . and then I started bouncing because I was off the rubber. then I Heard the  wall saying STOP KICKING ME i said shhh I'm trying  to climb down a wall here. as I hit the ground the first thing I said was it was simple. jokes it's pretty scary and tall .after me was Sophie mostly everyone in my group cheered Sophie
 on including me As my hands slowly stop shaking .


The End   
     


Monday 7 April 2014

Group presentation


Camp Presentation

WALT: present 
Success Criteria:
Know your stuff 
Loud clear voice
Share the main points
Make eye contact
Make sure every member participates






http://youtu.be/lS57Pk1LbAE

Presentation 


Task: Find out about air rifle's,


Reflection: I think I could talk louder





Monday 24 March 2014

Stats sharp shooting

Statistics
WALT calculate the mean, median, mode and range for a set of data.
TASK Elly and Troy want to find out once and for all: 
which Activity Group has the overall best score, (mean)
which Activity Group has the highest middle number, (median)
what score was the most common, (mode)
which activity group has the highest range. (range)  

In everyday life people collect data to look for trends and make decisions. In order to analyse the information, we need to understand the different ways to lOOK at the data.

Success Criteria you will know you are successful when: 
calculate the mean by adding up all the data (9 + 4 + 4 + 5 + 8 = 30) then divide the total by how many numbers there were (9, 4, 4, 5, 8 = 5 numbers so 30 ÷ 5 = 6).
calculate the median by ordering all numbers from smallest to biggest then selecting the middle number (4, 4, 5, 8, 9 = 5 is the middle number). If there are 6 numbers e.g. 4, 4, 5, 6, 8, 9, then the median is halfway = 5.5.
calculate the mode by identifying which number occurs most often (4, 4, 5, 8, 9 = 4 because there are two of them). You can have more than one mode.
calculate the range by finding the difference between the highest and lowest numbers (9 - 4 = 5).

41,42,28
37 is the mean
41 is the mediun 
Mode 0
14 is the range

Thursday 13 March 2014

My goals for camp

My goal is to over come my fears about earth boarding base cause if you fall off I'm pretty shore it hearts . My goal is not be afraid of wetas on falling on my head but I think you have a helmet I think so but still watch out . 


Walt:setsmart goals

Tuesday 4 March 2014

Me and my buddy's



Measles

Yellow  target Nearly 40 people in Auckland have recently been diagnosed with the infectious measles disease.

Westlake Boys High School on Aucklands North Shore is one of the hardest hit communities with 20 ill students.

Several other Westlake Boys High pupils who have not been immunised against measles have been asked to stay away for the next two weeks.

Measles is a very serious disease that is highly contagious and can spread through the air when an infected person coughs or sneezes.

The symptoms include fever, a cough, sore eyes and a rash. There is no treatment, and complications can be severe.

The Auckland Health Service has estimated that around 750 people are at immediate risk of catching the highly contagious disease.

Dr. Julia Peters said the Health Service had been working with the North Shore school for just over a week when the first case of measles was found there.

"This is definitely more than what we'd normally see. We're working hard to contain the measles within the Auckland region."

Dr. Peters said many people who had come down with the disease had recently been overseas and, in particular, in the Philippines.

The public health service has sent information to parents and students at Westlake Boys High and asked that those students who are not sure whether they have been immunised against measles to stay away.

"What we're trying to do is isolate those students as well as those who have measles, because students who are not immunised can get sick," she said.

Another seven cases of measles in Auckland are being investigated - three of them from the same school.

What to watch for Symptoms

* High fever.

* Runny nose, cough, red eyes.

* Small white spots inside mouth.

* Red, blotchy rash on face and neck and later over entire body.

WALT: Analysing an article

Task: Answer questions based on a Newspaper Article.

Success Criteria:

  • Show critical thinking in your answers.
  • Answer questions in full sentences.
  • Use correct spelling and punctuation.

1) How do people contract measles?if you stand next to someone with measles and if  they cough it spreads so you will get it .

2) Why do you think so many students at Westlake High School have contracted measles?i think someone   maybe in the holidays someone might of been there someone and someone got of and more people

3) What is the Auckland Health Services main role in this measles outbreak? keep it in auckland so it dose not spread round the world.

4) In the article Dr. Peters said “many people who had come down with the disease had recently been overseas and, in particular, in the Philippines.” Why do you think this is? Maybe acouple people in Philippines had them and they went and brought it back

5) In your opinion what would be the best way to avoid getting measles?i reckon you should stay at home so you don't get them

Use the following criteria to assess yourself and your peer

  • Show critical thinking in your answers.
  • Answer questions in full sentences.
  • Use correct spelling and punctuation.

Self asment yellow target

Monday 3 March 2014

Milania lang 5 years old but she didn't let 6.8km of busy roads get in the way way of an epic solo scooter journey

Milania Lang is only 5 years old, but she didn't let 6.8km of busy roads get in the way of an epic solo scooter journey.
Milania's intrepid outing began when mum Kamilla took her and two friends, plus Kamilla's 19-year-old niece Danielle, to watch a movie at the Auckland waterfront on a recent busy Sunday 
"We'd been at the Lantern Festival and I'd heard there was a kid's movie on at the Wynyard Quarter. So I decided to take the children to see it."
With the three children and Danielle, Kamilla went to an information centre on the waterfront to ask about the film.
"They were only about a metre behind me. I thought Milania was just an arm's reach away." But setting out for Princes Wharf, Kamilla realised Milania was missing.
"I asked the others if they knew where she was; but they didn't. So we started frantically looking." But Milania was nowhere to be seen.
Security staff reviewed CCTV footage, which revealed Milania had looked away at the moment the others went into the centre and it showed her looking around, confused, and scootering off in the opposite direction. 
Kamilla called the rest of Milania's family and they came immediately to join the search. After about an hour, the police were called.
One of the officers asked if there was any chance of Milania having gone home. Kamilla thought it unlikely but went with an officer to their home almost 7km away.
"I left the other children with my friend, and drove home in the car. The officer said it was time for us to alert the media and get a helicopter out. That really hit me hard."
They arrived at the family home, but Milania was nowhere to be seen. As they were driving back, a policewoman saw a small child four doors from the home, sitting on a footpath.
"She asked me 'is that her'," said Kamilla. And it was and she was very tired and quiet, but calm. The first thing she said to me was 'you lost me Mum'!
Milania explained she'd lost sight of the group and thought they must have headed home. "So she decided to scooter home to find us. She had to cross some of Auckland's busiest streets all by herself."
Milania's journey is all the more remarkable as she has been to the Wynyard Quarter only two or three times this summer.
Asked if she was scared or sad during her epic journey, Milania responded: "I cried, but just a little."

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Comprehension Questions

WALT: Analysing an article

Record your responses to the following questions on your blog. (Think about a suitable title) 

1) Do you think Milania did the right thing? What could she have done instead?  I don't think she did it the rite thing because she of look around then started to head home.
2) What are some potential dangers that Milania faced?she could of got hit or kid napped 
3) Define Frantically and what is another word for it that you could use.

Thursday 27 February 2014

Swimming sport 4

Next time I should maybe include more people not in kiwi because I don't care if kiwi doesn't win we all tried are best .


Swimming sports 3

I showed kotahitanga by  picking up my rubbish and maybe a couple alse 

Swimming sports 2

 



When it was my time to get up and go to the starting line for freestyle I was shaking so hard I nearly. Feel in but I lined up waiting for my name to get called out . I  dived In I was fine when I was swimming but I saw the flag when I was breathing I sore it get really shallow I pull my head out of the water and touched wall I saw every one cheering I jumped out  and I saw someone that  I raced I said Hi five nice race better luck next time .